axl-ryder's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Thou Have Shot A Holy Man]

here's some constructive criticism

it's not funny. All you did was take a stereotype and animate it. If you made a black man talk about how much he likes fried chicken for five minutes it would be both similar and still not funny. The animation is pretty bad, but not unbearable. I especially like how you used a photo from dogma, an actually funny religious parody.

[Bog Off]

this is pretty good

I enjoyed it, the animation wasn't bad and I found myself laughing a little bit. Good job on taking the whole anthropomorphic rat thing to a more creative level by fusing human with rat characteristics, it made for a much more enjoyable experience. All in all, good job, can't way to see what you make for the university.

KFoxyFox responds:

Thanks. I plan to make something with more frames per second for the said university animation. This was 15 fps, but for university I intend to go the whole hog and do it in 25 fps.

[I Never Liked You]

Animation aside

even though the animation was bad, that's alright since this was suppose to be a joke clip anyway. However, since the joke isn't really funny (at all), I'd say this fails on all accounts. I don't mean to sound like a dick, I'm only saying that you should either improve your humor or your animation, but this just isn't entertaining. Judging by the way the actor sounds, I'd say you're probably still a kid, so you've got plenty of time to improve. Good luck

[batlle in dimension x]

not the best

As a parody of all the overly used cliches in these battle sprite animations it's pretty funny. As a serious sprite work- not so great. The animation wasn't too bad so I'll give you credit for that, but you should try using more than the same few effects and smooth out the animation (and for goodness sake, get some better dialogue boxes). Also, work on your grammar, it makes the already hammy dialogue pretty unbearable.

[Cyanide & Happiness Book]

This is so hilarious

I watched this last night for the first time and though it was pretty funny. I had forgotten about it until I showed up for classes today to find out that my friend had actually bought one online and had I brought it on campus with him, turns out he used it for every single thing on this list, AND MORE! great flash btw.

[The Secret Life of Bees]

I'm not understanding the low score here.

it wasn't bad, but this at least deserves a 3.00 Decent animation, some attempts at humor and a fairly well put together movie. That's a lot more than can be said for most submissions on this sight. I think you did a pretty good job, keep it up (I honestly would say it's a six, but I'm putting an 9 to help balance out the score)

[Slappy]

oddly funny

I think that pretty much sums it up, good lip syncing btw, but try and work on your physical anatomy and backgrounds.

Thundaboom responds:

Thank you, I'll make sure to think about that next time.

[Roller Coaster Junkie]

This song

This song's been stuck in my head for song long it's driving me crazy. I'll be at work and all of a sudden I'll here "I am a roller coaster junkie" bouncing through my head. Yet I keep coming back to this video! Oh well, great job, anything that leaves that lasting of an impression has to be good.

[Pencilmation 14]

wow

It's impressive how smooth you manage to get your animation. very enjoyable atmosphere, it reminds me of the kind of things I wish I could have made happen in my notebooks as a kid.

[Waiting for the Bus!]

you guys

it's a parody of a formula, it's suppose to be sad, that's part of what makes it funny. Great short, laughed my ass off.