quick critique
First off, I must say that this deserves a ten from the sheer dedication and effort that was put into it, not to mention the great character designs and original storyline. I saw a few issues with it, and while I feel like a student trying to lecture a teacher, I thought they might worth pointing out. The special effects in the beginning looked a bit bland and not up to the same standard as your character work, but were notably improved by the end. The backgrounds looked pretty bad all the way through. When I say bad, I only mean from the same frame of reference I was taking your characters from. They appeared almost halfhearted as well as poorly drawn, and while they also seemed to improve marginally towards the end, it wasn't to the extent that your special effects did. The last qualm I had was with you're perspective, which looked off during the birds eye and worms eye shots. I only say all this because you seem to have such talent and potential, that improving those things certainly seems well within your grasp.
THANK YOU for the excellent animation and keep up the good work, I really hope you become a great animator some day.